by damommza
as I lace up my skates I think
the ice sure looks nice
I never really knew you were
skating on thin ice
My skates are very sharp and they
make a scratching sound
I wonder if the note I left
for you has been found
I’m skating and light headed as
I whirl on the rink
if you saw me now I wonder
oh, what would you think?
I heard the message that was left
by her on your phone
you were supposed to hear it but
when you were alone
At first I was so startled that
she called you her man
but that’s when I began to hatch
what would be my plan
first the bank, to take all our funds
that will be my pay
the dog’s are at your mother’s and
I am far away
damommza
/ November 14, 2011Personally, I’d take the dogs..unless they were his!
sunovawot
/ November 14, 2011I assumed they were, otherwise I would have expected an end like:
“the dogs are coming with me and
we are far away”
damommza
/ November 14, 2011I took the cat *grin*
sunovawot
/ November 14, 2011Uh-huh, the cat took herself, she just happened to be going in the same direction as you
damommza
/ November 14, 2011My cat would be driving my car. She’s smarter than all of us put together.
villow
/ November 14, 2011*smiles* me too. I like this…
he is skating on thin ice, not her…
*clappity*!
damommza
/ November 14, 2011EXACTLY!! She’s gliding away and having a ball!
)
villow
/ November 14, 2011takes guts to do… *awed*
damommza
/ November 14, 2011Oh, it’s not my story! LOL but It’s what I would have done too!
villow
/ November 14, 2011*thoughtful*
I might have taken longer. Depends…
lawah
/ November 14, 2011Phew ai hada wurried til teh last lyne
…ai wus hopin dat she wusn’t plannin on doin aniting silly!
Is gud yew ended it awn hur being far away, startin obur!
damommza
/ November 14, 2011…ADN…seh haz all teh munnies!
lawah
/ November 14, 2011*snerk* yeps berri important!
Sue Zen
/ November 15, 2011Skating on Thin Ice! Love it!
“first the bank, to take all our funds that will be my pay”
Great line, a really big smile on my face as I read that.
I wish I had the nerve to do the same when I got divorced.
damommza
/ November 15, 2011Hi Sue! Thank you so much for the comment! I’m glad I gave you that smile!