care

a sudden shout of laughter
a warm and breathless hug
a kiss given in passing
can lift you like a drug
but unlike wine or tablets
they don’t have a cost
they’ll never drag you down
leave you feeling that you’re lost
medicine has it’s places
i know, i take my share
but there’s no real substitute
for somebody who’ll care

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  1. catmadinwestyorkshire

     /  September 27, 2011

    How very true…and as always, well said.

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    • Thank you, I was trying to work out when I last physically touched someone while writing this and the closest I could come was X years ago, where 0 < X < ∞ πŸ™‚

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  2. damommza

     /  September 27, 2011

    *hodl up yoor floofy paw tu teh skreen rite there ————–>
    X
    me adn CM gowna hodl ower floofy paw rite tehre ———–>

    adn naow awl free uv us haz tuched wif a gentelniss adn a soffeness adn a kwietness wif no skardness..

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  3. I like this poem very much…
    *adds liddlol wite paw to group skreen touchings berry genlol*

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  4. damommza

     /  September 27, 2011

    *a genlol flooffy paw tutch wif yoo 2 Villow* :-))

    Reply

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