frozen: an aftermath

by damommza & sunovawot

rich, black, steaming
pot of gold
gently roasted
ease the cold

fill my mug and
top with cream
please god, help me
end this dream

still the shiver
runs my spine
fingers shake and
kittens whine

so until the
sun comes up
i will hide here
in this cup

sun arises
so to work
“back in to it”
bosses smirk

and thus it is
up to me
find the corpse and
dig it free

icy ground takes
all my might
then found it is
dreadful sight

it breaks my heart
once again
evil works of
heartless men

once more i ask
with a sob:
“god, why did i
take this job?”

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  1. damommza

     /  November 2, 2011

    LOLOL!!! As I said, it was a pleasure committing this crime with you! *dons rubber gloves, hazmat suit and face mask* šŸ˜€ šŸ˜€ šŸ˜€

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  2. The “frozen” referred to in the title can be found here: https://sunovawot.wordpress.com/2011/11/01/frozen/
    There is also a marvellous poem “Frozen… again” by villow: https://sunovawot.wordpress.com/2011/11/02/frozen-again/

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  3. Evening over there and up there! Another good one! but for some reason I find it is somehow detached from the first “frozen?”

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    • damommza

       /  November 2, 2011

      OHAI!! The first poem was like a crime of passion where a time stands still for the murderer and he can never go back to the way it was. The 2nd one is about the person who is hired to clean up and hide the evidence. At least that’s my take on it!! Sometimes sunovawot sees it differently but that is how I viewed it when I wrote my half of the sequel. šŸ˜€

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      • ah, yes, now I see… two different personas, lol… šŸ™‚

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        • damommza

           /  November 2, 2011

          YES!! I truly have Halloween Hangover! šŸ˜€

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          • *hands some willowbark tea over your way*
            this ought to help šŸ™‚

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            • damommza

               /  November 2, 2011

              I think it was one too many murder stories! šŸ™‚ I figured that the crime was a crime of passion, so the murderer had no clue what to do except bury the evidence. Then he hires a professional to dig everything up and get rid of it so that he can escape. It’s a good movie idea ifnikso! :-))

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  4. damommza

     /  November 2, 2011

    AWESOME!!! šŸ˜€ šŸ˜€

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