Weight

I’ve been carrying this weight so long it’s not a joke
puffing and panting like I’ve just had a smoke
I can’t take much more, it’s destroying my health
I thinks it’s past time you started carrying yourself

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8 Comments

  1. Would be a good sign for the fridge door. Nicely done, Sun 🙂

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  2. damommza

     /  January 16, 2012

    This is too funny! This could easily be the caption under a cartoon of a guy with another guy on his back! I also liked first version of “carrying yourself, yourself” 😆 😆 😆

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    • Thank you 😀
      If I had written it “carrying yourself, yourself” with the comma after the first yourself, then, with a little nimble footwork and colossal chutzpah, I may have been able to bluff it through as deliberate, not poor editing. However….. 😆

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