that final step

will it hurt, that final step
I have had my fill of pain
if I call out in despair
will you take my hand again
will you tell me all the good lies
the ones I need to hear
will you promise me you’ll follow
will you try to take my fear
I’m sorry if my tears
are hard for you to bear
I’m just scared that I will be
forever alone there

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  1. damommza

     /  May 22, 2012

    This is actually a fantastic poem. My biggest fear has always been “when I die, will I get lost?” because in real life, I am constantly getting lost. I used to ask my mother “how will I find my way after I die” and she said.”Don’t worry..we will all come and find you..”

    • Thank you, this was not a particularly easy poem to write, but once the idea bit I was hooked 🙂

  2. adaein3

     /  May 24, 2012

    I enjoy your writings, sunovawot. I must say I also enjoy damommza’s comments. “snif” I get awful lonesome out here, but mostly I appreciate the humanness between the two of you. So, THANKS FOR SHARING!

    • Thank you, and for my part, you are always and entirely welcome 😀

      • damommza

         /  May 24, 2012

        What a lovely thing to say adaein3! Always remember, you need not get lonely “out there”, you are always welcome “in here” 😀


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