two kinds of sleep

Due to a mistake on my part I originally credited a second verse to damommza that she was quoting, not claiming as her own. I apologize for any false imperessions that attribution gave.
As this blog is all original work I decided to remove the quoted verse rather than just alter the attribution.

sunovawot

and if all cares with gentle hand
were cast into the dying light
and peace lay on this verdant land
could I at last embrace the night
for light doth fade before my eyes
my thoughts repose in sable deep
can I then broach my heart’s goodbyes
and court the hours I must sleep

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  1. adaein3

     /  July 29, 2012

    sunovawot and damomza,
    Loveleee!! Oh, to be a child again with no troubles, no pains.

    Reply
    • Thank you 😀 I love that, starting from the same position, we produced two such different takes on a single theme 😀

      Reply
  2. Great work once again 😀
    * PB hanz owt sablol sleaping mask prizes 😉 *

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  3. Due to a mistake on my part I originally credited a second verse to damommza that she was quoting, not claiming as her own. I apologize for any false imperessions that attribution gave.
    As this blog is all original work I decided to remove the quoted verse rather than just alter the attribution.

    Reply
    • damommza

       /  July 31, 2012

      This was totally my fault. I should have put the poet’s name on the top, instead of the bottom of the e-mail, where it dropped off. Mea culpa! 😀

      Reply

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