golden was the moment that you entered my life
silver were the chains that held us bound
bitter were the tears you caused me to cry
and icy was the loneliness I found

nothing was the worth of anything you gave
everything was all that I desired
monstrous is the pain I’ll carry to my grave
since our immortal love has now expired

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  1. adaein3

     /  September 2, 2012

    WOW. I,m crushed and I was’t even part of it. Golden, silver, bitter and icy. Then, nothing, everything , monstrous, and expired, very descript!
    Thanks for sharing, Sunovawot. You are soooo good at this.

    • Thank you πŸ˜€ and what can I say, I like adjectives, although the last one was the “immortal”, which I chose to counterpoint the “expired” πŸ˜€

  2. damommza

     /  September 3, 2012

    Awesome new poem. Like adaein3 said..the adjectives are excellent!


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