though I’m tired I’ll carry on until I have to break
any good I’ve ever done was solely for your sake
just because you are not here doesn’t mean to stop
onward, ever onward I will go until I drop

many were the times that you’d take me to task
for doing what I wanted never thinking to ask
how could I do better, how to be a better soul
focussing on why and how instead of just my goal

and slowly as you worked on me I noticed I had changed
habits I’d thought set in stone were subtly rearranged
things may not be perfect but I never thought they’d be
the only thing that matters is that you’d be proud of me

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  1. abikertoo

     /  October 28, 2012

    Izz awl aebaout reespek, adn dis poem habs iyut!!

  2. damommza

     /  October 29, 2012

    What a great poem and it ends on a high note! 😆 I liked it a lot!

  3. icanhasanimlols

     /  October 29, 2012

    I am always amazed at the wit and talent we are blessed to have amongst the Cheezpeeps! Great work, I always enjoy your poems!

    • Thank you 😀 as I said to damommza I had no idea where I was going with this, but I was happy when I got there 😀

  4. …And isn’t this what we all strive for? For someone to be proud of us? Loved it, sunovawot!


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