splintered

she wandered through my splintered mind
though what on earth she hoped to find
I have no clue for as you see
there’s nothing there, not even me

she promenaded round my brain
though why she did I can’t explain
I let her go without a care
for in the end there’s no one there

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  1. damommza

     /  November 8, 2012

    I loved this poem! Very well written with a great ending. Sometimes I rush when reading your poems because I know the ending is going to be the best part. Most excellent! 😀

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    • Thank you 😀 I’ve had the first two lines kicking around for ages and I liked them too much to discard, so I eventually found a use for them 😀

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  2. abikertoo

     /  November 10, 2012

    Eyu izz berree wewayukkzd adn laeyud bayukk sew shee kuddnt faiyund yew, yew wuz eazzn aeraound onna bawttum haff ub deh mynd finkyun seum steuff aout adn noewun noetyssd, shee wuzz beumppn offadeh tawp paweurt adn fleu raiyut bai!!

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