by damommza & sunovawot

when “breaking-up” or “breaking-down”
do people really break?
like eggshells smashed in tiny bits
can there be no re-make?

do broken hearts leave a jagged edge
that cannot be smoothed down
but will be worn, in blackest night
a bleeding, ruby crown

if you must choose but find you’re torn
and there is no escape
to hold you tight til you decide
there’s nothing like duct tape

and are “migraines” really “your” grains
why has the flu not flown?
does the little “sty” outside your eye
really give a pig a home?

how is it I am “losing” hair
when I know it’s down the drain
and will I need a massive net
if I want to catch a train

and if I say I’m standing up
when I’m sat in a chair
it really begs the question
am I truly lying there

I often have such vagrant thoughts
how does a language grow?
the question may be gripping but
am I really “dying” to know

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  1. africanyouthness

     /  January 20, 2013

    Like it!

  2. damommza

     /  January 20, 2013

    This is the funniest poem you have ever ended!! I’m “dying”
    from that last stanza! LOLOLO

    • As usual you sent me an excellent foundation for me to add to πŸ˜€ and as so often happens, I wrote the last line of my bit first, then had to work out how to get there πŸ˜€

  3. Love it, you guys πŸ˜€

    • Thank you πŸ˜€ as usual in our joint works, damommza came up with the theme and structure, I tagged along πŸ˜€

  4. abikertoo

     /  January 21, 2013

    Izza gud zaympl ub NAIYUSS mawulprawppizzym ayut weurk, (ai fink?) πŸ™‚

  5. icanhasanimlols

     /  January 21, 2013

    Love the poem! “to hold you tight til you decide there’s nothing like duck tape” Ha, most wunnermus and such a great visual!

    Ohai an nyce ta meeecha Africanyouthness!


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