heaven

damommza and sunovawot

once more safe and sound
on that precious ground
that tells me I am home
nevermore to roam

while sitting in this womb
resplendent as a tomb
and everything I see
is a reflection of me

I have all that I need
I’m happy here, indeed
and should there be a change
it would be rather strange

the world outside me grows
will end up, no one knows
but here, within my hall
I know I have it all

there is no time or place
better than this space
where angels sing my poem
for heaven is my home…

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  1. damommza

     /  March 16, 2013

    I genuinely love this poem. The ending, pure genius. You always make the good, great and once again, I tip my hat to you.. Absolutely superb. πŸ˜€

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  2. I had to read it it a third time to get it. Like it, Damommza and sunovawot. Peaceful.
    Is there more? Thankyou.

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    • Thank you πŸ˜€ This one came about because I turned something damommza wrote into a verse, and then damommza expanded my verse into a poem, so this is complete as it stands πŸ˜€

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  3. abikertoo

     /  March 17, 2013

    Don’t need to add anything, neat, sweet & complete, you make it seem so effortless when sometimes it really isn’t!!

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    • damommza

       /  March 17, 2013

      OHAI ABT!!!! Good to see you on here again..there has been to much “quietness” from you! I hope you are feeling well and have fully recovered. I’m so glad you liked the poem. Sometimes, when a poem is finished for us, there is still room for others to add things in their head to make it complete. For us, we can tell when it’s finished and then it’s time for a new one! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

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    • Sometimes, not often enough though, it can be that simple. There are days when the words flow, and say exactly what you mean, without having to batter them into submission first. πŸ˜€

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