the creeper

by damommza & sunovawot

it came slowly creeping
while I was sleeping
and watched without making a sound

it wondered in silence
and in defiance
if the earth was where I was bound

it came with a thought
not to get caught
but intended to make me its prey

it slithered and slunk
crawled up my bunk
and tried to take me away

I quickly awoke
tried not to choke
as it dragged me out of my bed

and shaking with fright
I held on tight
and offered it my brother instead

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7 Comments

  1. damommza

     /  March 25, 2013

    I wrote half of it and it stills cares me! 😆 😆 Excellent ending and thank you for “polishing it up” a bit for me! 😀 😀

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  2. icanhasanimlols

     /  March 25, 2013

    Loved this one! I grew up with 5 sisters and we were all ensconced in one bedroom with bunk beds. I think this would be the outcome if this had happened to us. Being the youngest, I’ll wager that I would be the one sacrificed to the monster! Good one!

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    • damommza

       /  March 25, 2013

      Ohai icanhasanimlols!!! Haow iz yo tudai? 😀 I’m glad you liked the poem. Sun, in his wisdom, offered up his brother. I totally agreed with that! *snerk*

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    • I never had to share with more than one, but again I was the younger, which made me the disposable one 😆

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