free

shades and shadows wallowing
the curse it has been cast
the war of words that’s following
will soon enough be past
I’d cry if I were able
but what’s the point of tears
the offers on the table
the best I’ve seen for years
circle round and chase my tale
there’s games still left to play
time enough for me to fail
before the end of day
but I would give all that I own
hold nothing back for me
to be left once more on my own
and to be truly free

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9 Comments

  1. damommza

     /  May 12, 2013

    Again, the last two lines pulls the whole poem together..I like the cadence as well..applause for this one.. πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

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    • Thank you πŸ˜€ this was one of those poems that just seem to flow, and the cadence is an important part of it πŸ˜€

      Reply
  2. I’m sure your’re not alone there πŸ™„

    @@@@@ πŸ™‚

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  3. abikertoo

     /  May 14, 2013

    Adn steukk aegaeyun, mebbee sew!!

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  4. Annudder won dat iz 2 closs 2 mi eggs periance fr mi kumfort!

    (sowwy dat ai amz soooo layt geddin 2 in joi in yer peoms, RSL. sighhhhh…)

    Reply
    • Thank you πŸ˜€

      It is nice that you come at all, I think it would by churlish at the very least to demand you were more timely πŸ˜†

      Reply

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