I must have had my reasons,
and maybe if I try
a bit of peace and quiet
and I can work out why
it’s no good, I’ve been thinking
but the reasons remain hid
now do me a favour
and tell me what I did


kick it down my boyos
that wall has got to go
mother’s in the out-house
and it’s setting up to snow
take the doorway with it
come on lads, move your feet
just remember mother’s there
and try to be discreet

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  1. Like
    Reminds me of a chilly november, back in ’65’ when my parents had sold their house and we moved in next door because their new house wasn.t finished cause of a strike in the bricklayers union and this temporary house had no indoor plumbing and the new neighbors had a german shepard that, of course, ran loose, terrorizing anyone who looked her in the eye. (THERE ARE ALIENS IN SECTOR 7, AVOID EYE CONTACT. IF THERE ARE NO EYES, AVOID ALL CONTACT!) Anyhow, mom had time to read Pilgrim’s Progress before we realized she was being held prisoner in a very cold outdoor loo.

  2. abikertoo

     /  July 10, 2013

    Saounndz laiyuk ae gud aierrush darrynkn sawng tew mee, beut adaein3’s stoerree izz beddr danna sawung, aifinkso!!

    • has anyone ever told you that you have thee most abstract lolspeak ever in the whole entire werold? cause, to me, you do. it’s always a challenge for me (and fun) to read yore writings. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ Those smiley faces better show up!!

      • abikertoo

         /  July 11, 2013

        Fankies beerree meucch, ai tarai tew bee dyfreunt, weurrkz fahr mee, ai maiyut bee ayubbz trakkt oar sumpyn!!

    • They were just a couple of ideas that wouldn’t stretch to a full poem, but they amused me πŸ˜€ and I agree about adaein3’s story πŸ˜€

  3. damommza

     /  July 10, 2013

    Seriously…the 2nd one is hysterical and adaein3’s story makes it even funnier..the first one is just like a little kid in “time out”..thinking about what he did but too little to even know what it was…. πŸ˜€ I love this grouping..two small paintings of scenes frozen (and possibly in an outhouse) in time. πŸ˜€


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