the mess

by damommza & sunovawot

If you confess
You are a mess
It’s still my guess
That you possess
A keener wit
Not just a bit
You are a hit
From where I sit
I like your “flow”
The rhymes you know
Hide high or low
Where ‘ere you go
I’ll find you yet
On the Internet
And wager a bet
We ain’t done yet 🙂

I make no claim
for in this game
only my name
remains the same
my fickle mind
just seeks to find
thoughts to unbind
wit to be shined
and you can look
on ‘net, in book
I can’t be took
by hook or crook
but if you press
I will profess
I’m still a mess
more or less 🙂

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  1. abikertoo

     /  July 28, 2013

    Yew izza meyuss ai geyuss beut ai knoe teh wurdz wyl floe awnta teh paeypurr wiffa smeuvvneuss dayut taeykkz yeurr breyff aewae fahr ae gud poeurrsheun ub deh dae!!

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  2. damommza

     /  July 28, 2013

    I still can’t read this without laughing. Your ending is superb. 😆 😆 😆

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    • This was one of those occasions when your beginning was such that I knew how I would end it, before I started writing 😀

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      • damommza

         /  July 29, 2013

        HA!! and it was all started with one word and my part came out, literally, in one sentence.
        😀

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  3. Not to digress, I say, “YES! You have finesse!” 😎

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    • that’s according to you, and maybe it’s true, whatever, thank you 😀

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      • damommza

         /  July 29, 2013

        I’m so very glad that you’re pleased
        my mind has been completely eased
        I knew when we wrote it
        our halves were a sure fit
        one more opportunity seized!

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