by damommza & sunovawot

the fires burnt so brightly
making ashes of my life
your painful words and looks cut
through my heart like a knife

I ripped apart your words and
threw them in to the flame
you lied and cast aspersions
but never took the blame

the blame that you had coming
for the evil you had wrought
and someone had to pay for
the misery you brought

well I am not a judge but
it seemed the need was dire
and contemplation told me
the answer lay in fire

so when the stove was ready
and coals were glowing bright
I wedged your body in there
then fled into the night

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  1. damommza

     /  November 19, 2013

    Some people put out fires…we make them bigger… *snerk*

  2. abikertoo

     /  November 20, 2013

    Saounndz laiyuk deh syzzl adn pawp ferapee wryt laweurjj!!

    • damommza

       /  November 20, 2013

      abt-“deh syzzl adn pawp” make me laugh!! Glad you liked it! πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

  3. adaein3

     /  November 20, 2013

    πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€ :0

    • adaein3

       /  November 20, 2013

      first smile- anticipating new poem.
      second smile- enjoying new poem content.
      last -was supposed to be shocked face for the ending!!
      Nice job, you two.

      • damommza

         /  November 20, 2013

        Thank you adaein3!! sun had to help me lift the body and get it in there..a gal can’t do it all on her own, ya know! *wink* so glad you liked it!! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

      • Thank you, damommza topped and tailed it, just leaving a bit of a bridge for me to construct πŸ˜€


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