man

I
what a man I could have been
had you not held me back
every time I built up steam
you’d knock me off my track

I could have been the perfect man
so wise and brave and strong
but every time you came too close
my plans would all go wrong

II
yes, what a man you could have been
if things were not the same
but fairness is as fairness does
and I am not to blame

if everything stood on its head
and we rewrote god’s plan
you’d maybe be a winner then
or, with luck, just a man

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2 Comments

  1. damommza

     /  May 16, 2014

    Oh, this is good and that last line cuts to the quick! I don’t know if you could stop the bleeding after that last comment!! Very Good!

    Reply
    • Thank you 😀 I wrote the last line before I wrote the rest of part II, giving myself a target to aim at 😀

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